摘要

雅思的評分標準已經(jīng)詳細地描述了對于連貫與銜接的要求。只要我們盡量依照這個標準寫文章，就能最大程度地提高文章的流暢度。下面是南京新東方的小編搜集整理的相關(guān)資料，希望對大家有所幫助。

一、有邏輯有條理地組織論點

一篇文章只有一個立場，但是論點可以有幾個。那么這幾個論點如何排列，哪個在前哪個在后呢?這些是有講究的，同學(xué)們不能想到哪寫哪兒。下面的段落是學(xué)生的例文，其中就存在論點排列的問題

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under no control, it will be terrible, because young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours, and the information online can be good and bad as well. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. So, studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.
這段文字的中心內(nèi)容是網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)存在的問題。論點包括兩個，學(xué)生的自律和網(wǎng)絡(luò)的內(nèi)容。關(guān)于學(xué)生自律的問題有兩句話，young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours,以及 If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day.這兩句話有相關(guān)性，但是卻被網(wǎng)絡(luò)那句話隔開了。這樣會給讀者造成閱讀的障礙，降低文章的流暢度。所以重新調(diào)整這幾句話的位置，就可以很快解決這個問題。

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under no control, it will be terrible. Young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. And the information online can be good and bad as well. So, studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

二、連接手段使用得自然多樣

論點之間如何連接?有哪些連接手段?下面這個段落的中心內(nèi)容是看電視太多產(chǎn)生的問題，共有三個論點。所使用的連接手段是正確有效的，但是單一，少變化。每一個論點之間都使用了副詞做連接詞，而且都是在句首。

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems. Firstly, it is bad for children’s health. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weak body. Secondly, if children spend too much time watching TV, they would have less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to their feeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Last but not least, watching TV too long, children may become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactive activity by many researches.

下面的段落是對照版本。其中使用了代詞，副詞和形容詞等多種連接手段，而且做到了自然銜接：

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems and the most obvious one is the negative impact on physical health of children. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weak body.Another concern is about social development of children. If they spend too much time watching TV, they would have less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to their feeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Children watching TV too long may also become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactive activity by many researches.

三、段落的中心內(nèi)容與中心句

一個段落只有一個中心思想，這個中心思想通常會體現(xiàn)在一個總結(jié)性的句子當中，這句話叫做中心句。中心句在學(xué)術(shù)文章中常常落在段首，以方便閱讀。中心句如同射擊的靶子，要直指文章主題，這樣后面的論點才不會偏離題目，因此非常重要。上面關(guān)于看電視太多的段落，中心句就寫的非常明確。下面再給同學(xué)們一些句子，可以靈活應(yīng)用于立論段，即證明自己觀點的段落。

It is hard to argue with the fact that workers are the direct/ first beneficiaries of this working fashion.
There is no doubt that many employees would favour/welcome telework.
Statistics show that there are few things which impact the human mind more than mass media.
The mass media hold a large share of importance in society.
A life without the presence of mass media would seem improbable for many.
However, this does not mean that …

下面是一些可以用于讓步段的中心句：
there are certainly some minor downsides in…
I admit that … is not perfect.
I understand why some people oppose …
Of course there are some opposite voices against …
the disapproving voices also sound reasonable.
It is natural to regard a university as a phase preparing for a future job…
the other side of the argument is also valid.
Surely pushing their children towards academic study makes sense for parents.
You cannot be honest without admitting ….

四、指示代詞的準確使用

中文和英文在指示代詞上有較大的區(qū)別。中文習(xí)慣重復(fù)名詞，而英文則強調(diào)用代詞。如‘我今天把錢包丟了，我那個錢包可好看了。’而相對應(yīng)的英文表達是使用代詞而不再重復(fù)錢包這個名詞， ‘I lost my purse today, and it was so cute.’ 或者 ‘I lost my purse, which was so cute.’流暢度高的文章指示代詞使用正確，指向清楚。下面這兩句話當中有兩個代詞it，但是存在指代不清的問題：

Government’s investment is always the focus that people pay more attention to. Recently, itbecomes a controversy that whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions.

前一個it指代后面whether從句，后一個it指代government.為了理清關(guān)系，減少模糊，最好不用形式主語這個句型，而是直接把主語從句放在主語的位置上。修改如下：

Government’s budget is always the attention focus of the public. Whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions causes controversy.

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