不少考生都說(shuō)托福作文真的很難的，但是其實(shí)，只要大家認(rèn)真?zhèn)淇剂?，還是可以考取不錯(cuò)的分?jǐn)?shù)的。下面小編送給大家一篇托福真題作文范文：工作到底為了什么。

托福寫(xiě)作考些什么?

托福寫(xiě)作包括兩部分，需在50分鐘的時(shí)間內(nèi)完成。

第一部分是綜合寫(xiě)作，以閱讀和聽(tīng)力材料為基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作試題，寫(xiě)作時(shí)間為20分鐘?？忌紫刃枰喿x一篇學(xué)術(shù)篇章，閱讀的時(shí)間是3分鐘。然后文章隱去，考生需要聽(tīng)一段大約為2分鐘左右的與閱讀主題相關(guān)的演講。之后考生需要針對(duì)閱讀和演講中的觀點(diǎn)作文，總結(jié)并說(shuō)明演講的內(nèi)容與閱讀中觀點(diǎn)的關(guān)系，在20分鐘的時(shí)間內(nèi)完成一篇150~225字的文章。

第二部分是獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作，需要考生根據(jù)自己的知識(shí)和經(jīng)驗(yàn)陳述、解釋并支持對(duì)待某一問(wèn)題的某個(gè)看法，考查綜合語(yǔ)言技能的作文題目的評(píng)分以回答的質(zhì)量、完整性和準(zhǔn)確性為依據(jù)。在30分鐘內(nèi)完成一篇300字以上的文章。

一般情況下如果你的時(shí)間充裕，小編建議大家能多寫(xiě)盡量多寫(xiě)，并不是網(wǎng)上有些人說(shuō)的多寫(xiě)怕出錯(cuò)，小編認(rèn)為的多寫(xiě)并不是沒(méi)話(huà)找話(huà)，這里講的多寫(xiě)是要考生讓文章更加完整的情況下去填充內(nèi)容，讓寫(xiě)作文章更加的豐富。

本話(huà)題高分范文賞析

One of the most overlooked reasons why people work is to help other people. Government officials, social and charity workers, and religious organizations, and others all work not only for their own salaries, but also work for the common good. They labor for others because of their moral convictions, for reasons of personalreciprocity, and because they want to make society more stable, thereby benefiting themselves and others. Some of the most famous charity workers in the world have been affiliated with religious groups. For instance, many of the foreigners living in the poor regions of Africa are doctors, teachers, and other professionals who are paid by religious organizations to help the poor, sick, and needy people there. These professionals could make much more money if they worked in rich countries. They have chosen to help poor people because they believe their religion tells them to help people who cannot help themselves. They are working for others for moral or religious reasons. Some people work for other people because at some time in their lives, someone else has helped them. Many teachers can tell stories about a particular teacher who changed their lives. The gift a great teacher gave to them inspired them to become teachers themselves. Likewise, many people become doctors because a doctor saved one of their family member's life and they felt like they owed a debt of gratitude that money could not repay. To such people, the motivation for working is not the paycheck at the end of the month, but the smile on a child's face when they read their first book, or the look of joy on new parents' faces when they see their healthy newborn baby. Finally, some people work for others because they believe that society is only safe and stable when all of its members are happy. These people include good government officials who try to make policies that benefit the poorer classes of society. They know that only by making policies that help poor people live richer, happier lives can they lower crime, sickness, and poverty rates, and make society safer and happier for all citizens.

托福寫(xiě)作誤區(qū)有哪些：

1.是不是準(zhǔn)備幾個(gè)名人的例子就可以了？

并不是，首先要切題，如果題目說(shuō)的對(duì)象是4-7歲的孩子，你舉個(gè)喬布斯的例子，就算偏題了。

其次，舉例子的重點(diǎn)是要先描述一個(gè)例子，然后表達(dá)你自己對(duì)于這個(gè)例子的看法和分析。并不要求使用名人、或者非常復(fù)雜的例子，閱卷人并不會(huì)按照論據(jù)的復(fù)雜性來(lái)看文章。

還有例子的表達(dá)不要啰嗦，不要像寫(xiě)日記一樣，而且要地道。

所以，名人的例子或者個(gè)人的例子都可以，只要切題和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)地道就行。還要重點(diǎn)強(qiáng)調(diào)，在例子前面要有展開(kāi)，先把道理論述清楚再舉例子，不能主題句寫(xiě)完就寫(xiě)例子，沒(méi)有展開(kāi)分?jǐn)?shù)就不會(huì)有g(shù)ood，具體可以參考fair等級(jí)的描述。

2.托福寫(xiě)作多寫(xiě)就可以拿到高分

很多學(xué)生會(huì)疑惑自己文章練習(xí)挺多的了，但是為什么分?jǐn)?shù)卻一直上不去？

寫(xiě)作不能閉門(mén)造車(chē)。首先，寫(xiě)作要有大量的輸入，才能輸出，所以寫(xiě)之前要有歸納。

建議大家分類(lèi)準(zhǔn)備話(huà)題語(yǔ)料和表達(dá)，還有分類(lèi)話(huà)題范文，想讓大家先記一些素材，仿寫(xiě)一下范文，這樣大家在輸出的時(shí)候才會(huì)有話(huà)寫(xiě)，不斷改進(jìn)提高。

其次，寫(xiě)完之后要總結(jié)。如果一味輸出，不去找自己的問(wèn)題，不去改進(jìn)，也很難得到提升。所以寫(xiě)完之后一定要讓老師修改，不斷發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題，總結(jié)問(wèn)題，這樣才能事半功倍。