今天小編為考生帶來了托福寫作范文：人們長壽的原因是什么。考生們快和小編一起看看范文里都是怎么寫的吧。

The causes of people's longevity today

In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

首先提供一份數(shù)據(jù)給大家參考：20世紀(jì)初全球平均年齡(life expectancy)大約45歲。到20世紀(jì)末，這個(gè)數(shù)字已經(jīng)增長到70歲左右?？忌梢越Y(jié)合這份數(shù)據(jù)來做一些文章。然后要分析人們?cè)絹碓介L壽的原因，大家可以從這幾點(diǎn)來展開：越來越好的飲食條件，飲食衛(wèi)生，越來越科學(xué)的飲食模式;越來越發(fā)達(dá)的醫(yī)療技術(shù)、越來越完善的醫(yī)療保健系統(tǒng);經(jīng)濟(jì)穩(wěn)定、社會(huì)穩(wěn)定。舉個(gè)極端一點(diǎn)的例子：前蘇聯(lián)(the previous Soviet Union)解體(disintegration/breakup)后，俄羅斯的平均年齡大幅度下降。

本話題高分范文賞析

Among various factors that contribute to today's longevity of people are three most obvious ones: the improvement of food conditions, the development of modern medical technology, and finally current stability of economy in our country.

Food conditions are better than before and are still being developed with a rapid pace. First of all, foods are more hygienic. People today drink untainted mineral water, sterilized skim milk, which are cheaply supplied in supermarkets. Furthermore, foods are more nutrient. Not to mention various carefully designed nutrient products. People can just ignore the possibility of being dystrophic, since they can keep nutrient balance by simply taking a cheap pill of vitamin compound every day. Another essential improvement that contributes to people's longevity is swiftly developing medical technology. Development of modern medical technology has always been amazing. Certain diseases such as tuberculosis, pneumonia, and dysentery are now easy to remedy with low expenses, but in the past, they are all probably lethal ones. The dental technology seems developed little except its exorbitantly charged bill, yet the simplest technology contributes to people's longevity most. It is not difficult to imagine that if an individual who lived in the past got a toothache, without certain dental care which is common today, he was certainly in an awful prospect: he might even die of a toothache!

Current societal and economic stabilization is also a very indispensable factor. People have less pressure in a more stable society, the less pressure they suffer, the healthier they are. Today's ideal stabilization even provides people an opportunity to secure their future—buy insurances. Various types of insurances are readily available, which make people feel safe, and have to a large extent reduced people' anxieties, and therefore indirectly contribute significantly to the longevity of people.

托福作文怎么提高：

1.考生要抓住美國人的思維，這樣才能以不變應(yīng)萬變。托福寫作通常是一個(gè)五段三點(diǎn)式的寫作，通常我們也叫魚骨頭式：開頭段+論述段+結(jié)尾段。新托福寫作考查的也就是考生是否會(huì)熟練運(yùn)用這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)去表達(dá)自己對(duì)一個(gè)問題的看法。

2.要用模版的話，就用自己的模版。用自己平時(shí)說話的自然方式來表的，形成了自己的思維方式，用起來肯定是相當(dāng)自然的。怎么形成自己的模版呢?用至少20道題練手：看自己是習(xí)慣先總結(jié)聽力觀點(diǎn)，然后與閱讀觀點(diǎn)一一對(duì)應(yīng)去寫，還是聽力觀點(diǎn)和閱讀觀點(diǎn)分成兩部分去概括，然后再集中論述他們的關(guān)系;有了框架，就到實(shí)質(zhì)了。論述的時(shí)候，一般的學(xué)生都只是一句大話帶過，而沒有將足夠的證據(jù)或細(xì)節(jié)擺上。

3.要多關(guān)注針對(duì)考試的機(jī)經(jīng)，機(jī)經(jīng)常分為大范圍、小范圍和超級(jí)小范圍，隨著考試的臨近，越小范圍的機(jī)經(jīng)會(huì)逐漸出現(xiàn)。大范圍機(jī)經(jīng)比較適合練思路，可以每天隨機(jī)挑幾題，做列提綱練習(xí);接著在小范圍機(jī)經(jīng)中挑自己不太熟悉或之前未做過的題目，做列提綱練習(xí)，建議這時(shí)的提綱要列得相對(duì)精細(xì)些，并把有些題作為本周上機(jī)完整練習(xí)的題目;