培訓(xùn):雅思、托福、GRE、SAT、AP、劍橋英語
很多同學(xué)寫完作文后,感覺自己發(fā)揮很好,分?jǐn)?shù)出來后卻仍然是6.5,甚至是6分。下面是小編搜集整理的兩篇滿分的雅思作文以及雅思7分以上的作文怎么寫的資料。
雅思滿分作文范文篇一:蜜蜂的一生
話題:The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Two things to consider are:
范文
The diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee. We can see that the complete life cycle lasts between 34 and 36 days. It is also noticeable that there are five main stages in the development of the honey bee, from egg to mature adult insect.
The life cycle of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an egg; the female typically lays one or two eggs every 3 days. Between 9 and 10 days later, each egg hatches and the immature insect, or nymph, appears.
During the third stage of the life cycle, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times. This moulting first takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later, and again another 9 days later. After a total of 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage, and in the space of only 4 days it reaches full maturity.
雅思滿分作文范文篇二:房屋保護(hù)
話題:The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding.
范文
The diagrams compare two different methods of defence for homes which are at risk of being flooded.
The key difference between the diagrams is that they show flood protection with and without a stopbank. In either case, the at-risk home is raised on stilts above ground level.
The first diagram shows how a stopbank acts as a flood barrier to stop river water from flooding homes. The stopbank is a small mound of land next to the river that is higher than the 100-year flood level, and prevents the river from bursting its banks. Nearby houses can be built on stilts to prevent flooding from rainwater, and a floodgate beneath the stopbank can be opened to allow this ‘ponding’ to drain off into the river.
When there is no stopbank, as shown in the second diagram, there will be nothing to stop the river from flooding. In this case, the solution is to put buildings on stilts. The height of the stilts is measured so that the floor of the house is 300mm above the 100-year flood level. This measurement is called the ‘freeboard’.
雅思備考寫作總體方法:
task 1分析思路,使用固定詞匯與句式;task 2 針對題型,寫模板(總共就用了2天時間);余下三天,打印出來幾套雅思寫作專用紙,每天有2篇task 1(弱項),一篇task 2(一定要真正的使用自己的模板)。
雅思寫作task 1操作方法: 雅思真題4到8中的line chart, bar chart, pie chart和table題以及地圖題、流程圖題分別去找出一個,參考以后的范文(只看7.5分以上及官方范文,這幾種類型都有的,不是范文就是8分的好文),然后分析其寫作結(jié)構(gòu);
總結(jié)出每一個題的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)(要如何去進(jìn)行比較等);
根據(jù)10天突破總結(jié)各種詞(替換詞、各種上升、下降詞等、連接詞),每個最多最多選2個就夠了!并且一定要附上例句!
接著就是練吧……拿到一個表,迅速整理出寫作結(jié)構(gòu),就寫的快多了!
task 2 操作方法:
1.把藍(lán)皮那個《十天突破IELTS寫作完整真題庫與6-9分范文全解》翻一遍,分出了幾大類。
2.針對這幾大類,在書里分別去找一道有范文的題,按照范文總結(jié)自己的雅思寫作大作文模板,而后又按照這個模板把范文改編了,這樣就有了完全使用自己模板的高分范文;再找其他有范文的題目,用這個模板改編至少2篇范文;
3.連著3天每天一篇大作文,完全使用自己的模板。
切記:雖然有這么多種分類,但是每個模板要保持高度的一致性(比如開頭,結(jié)尾,連接詞,舉例用語,邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)等等),否則每個都有獨特的東西,到時候肯定會混亂的!不實用!模板一定熟記在心!
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