今天小編為考生帶來(lái)了托福寫(xiě)作范文學(xué)習(xí)：兒童的成長(zhǎng)環(huán)境?？忌鷤兛旌托【幰黄鹂纯捶段睦锒际窃趺磳?xiě)的吧。

Big city or countryside, which is better for children to grow up in?It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

高分范文賞析

Having grown up in the country myself, I can say without a doubt that I want my own children to grow up in the city. Life in the city is incomparably better for children than life in the country. The city has better schools,health care, jobs, and more exposure to the outside world. The two most important things in any child's life are health and education. In the country,if children get sick, there are no good hospitals to take them to. Families are often so poor that they can't afford to send all of their children to school, and the schools are usually of low quality anyway. In the cities, on the other hand, health care facilities and schools are of excellent quality.

Children from cities also have a much higher chance of getting into excellent universities. City universities have large numbers of spaces reserved for local residents while they have relatively fewer spaces for students from the countryside. If I want my child to have a good chance of getting into a good university, I would raise them in a city.

City salaries are significantly higher than salaries in the country. Jobs in the city are also much easier, on average, than jobs in the country. A worker in the country might spend 14 hours a day laboring outdoors in the fields and make much less money per month than the city worker who typically works only eight hours a day. I want my child to grow up and get a good, high-paying job. A better place to find those jobs is in a city.

Finally, I want my children to grow up into a world that is larger than just their immediate surroundings. In a city they will have a chance to meet people from all over the country and all over the world. They will have chances to absorb history and culture from the cities parks, theatres, and museums. Only in the city will they have the chance to be truly global citizens.

托福寫(xiě)作考生需注意哪些丟分點(diǎn)？

一：中式思想

因?yàn)槭艿降赜蛴绊?，大陸考生從小所接受的都是中式思想的教育，但是?dāng)?shù)搅丝忌鷮W(xué)習(xí)英文時(shí)，是難以馬上就把中文思想給糾正過(guò)來(lái)。中式思想以及西式思想在表達(dá)上都會(huì)有很大的差異存在。此過(guò)錯(cuò)同樣是大家在考試時(shí)易犯的，如此還要如何去防止這種狀況的發(fā)作呢?其中好是在平常操練的時(shí)分要多堆集地道的英文表達(dá)方式，不斷的操練讓你自己逐步的習(xí)慣西式思想和表達(dá)方式，只要這樣才能讓你的托福作文取得高分。

二：用詞的過(guò)錯(cuò)

中英文的表達(dá)同樣是不相同，通常相同的一個(gè)詞，在中文中相同的字還可以代表多種意義，但是在英文里相同一個(gè)意思在不同的語(yǔ)境中體現(xiàn)出是要通過(guò)不一樣的詞匯來(lái)出現(xiàn)的，因此在托福寫(xiě)作時(shí)，用詞必定要準(zhǔn)。平日再去更多的堆集詞匯的一起，同時(shí)可以按照語(yǔ)句來(lái)記憶作用會(huì)比較好。這兒舉一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的比如：affect與shock相同都是影響的意義，前者只是影響，沒(méi)有幅度上的不同，但后者就是很劇烈的影響。