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托福寫作作為一項輸出型的考察,當(dāng)你想要寫一句話的時候,如果想不清楚,那你可以停下來,捋一捋思路,等想好了再寫。雖然寫下來的話不一定完美,但是掌握一些擴充句子的小技巧就能展開,接下來就跟小編一起來看看托福寫作如何擴充句子吧!
托福寫作擴充句子方法:
1. 增加并列成分;
2. 增加修飾成分;
3. 增加從句;
4. 增加連詞;
托福寫作,擴充句子有技巧。如以下例句:
They grow long hair.
這個句子沒有任何閃光點,我們利用以上擴充方法來修改這句話,變成了如下的句子:
They grow long hair, regardless of the gender, usually part of which is dyed in gold.
這句話就相當(dāng)璀璨奪目,有修飾成分,也有從句。
同理,做以下的三個練習(xí):
1. They wear jeans.
They wear jeans in each and every season, commonly knees of which are deliberate torn.
2. Boys wear earrings.
Boys are keen on earrings and other weird ornaments.
3. Girls smoke.
Girls are fond of Marlboros or some odd bad words.
以下為一組多個句子組成的一段話。
Energy is much needed now. And nuclear plants are clean and economical. They can produce vast amounts of energy. But people, especially local residents are very concerned about safety. They hold a strong negative attitude toward them.
這幾個句子都是簡單句,雖然表達的意思很清楚,但是明顯沒有滿足ETS的口味偏好,下面我們將上述句子搭配成完整的復(fù)雜句。合并句子的準(zhǔn)則為:同一個詞匯可以合并,變成從句或修飾成分,例如“energy”、“people”。修改后的句子為:
Nuclear plants are a clean and economical way of producing vast amounts of much-needed energy; however people, especially local residents, who are very concerned about safety, hold a strong negative attitude toward them.
同理,做兩個練習(xí):
修改前:Some people succeed. Other people fail. The difference is not the number of opportunities. It is whether they can take advantage of opportunities. Opportunities will arise in the course of one's life, though they are rare.
修改后:One essential difference between those who succeed and those who fail is the extent to which they take advantage of opportunities rather than the number of opportunities, which will inevitably arise, if rarely, in the course of one's life.
修改前:College students now are primarily interested in grades and economic success. They are expected to cheat more frequently. They are unlike those graduated ten years ago. They are only interested in their own personal future and consider little the problem of society.
修改后:College students, primarily interested in grades and economic success, are expected to cheat more frequently than those who graduated ten years ago and are far less concerned with the problem of society than with their own personal future.
2. Stone does decay, and so tools of long ago have remained when even the bones of the man who made them have disappeared without trace.
3. Insects would make it impossible for us to live in the world; they would devour all our crops and kill our flocks and herds, if it were not for the protection we get from insect-eating animals.
4. It is true that during their explorations they often faced difficulties and dangers of the most perilous nature, equipped in a manner which would make a modern climber shudder at the thought, but they did not go out of their way to court such excitement.
5. There is only one difference between an old man and a young one: the young man has a glorious future before him and old one has a splendid future behind him: and maybe that is where the rub is.
6. I find young people exciting. They have an air of freedom, and they have not a dreary commitment to mean ambitions or love comfort. They are not anxious social climbers, and they have no devotion to material things.
7. I am always amazed when I hear people saying that sport creates goodwill between the nations, and that if only the common peoples of the world could meet one another at football or cricket, they would have no inclination to meet on the battlefield.
8. It is impossible to say simply for the fun and exercise: as soon as the question of prestige arises, as soon as you feel that you and some larger unit will be disgraced if you lose, the most savage combative instincts are around.
9. It has been found that certain bats emit squeaks and by receiving the echoes, they can locate and steer clear of obstacles------or locate flying insects on which they feed. This echo-location in bats is often compared with radar, the principle of which is similar.
10. As the time and cost of making a clip drop to a few days and a few hundred dollars, engineers may soon be free to let their imaginations soar without being penalized by expensive failure.
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